Talk:Hey You!/GA1
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:22, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
- Lead
- The single was made available on February 23, 1998 as a CD single in the Netherlands -> The single was released as a CD single
- in the Netherlands on February 23, 1998.
- with its lyrically describing -> with its lyrics portraying
- Unlink CD single
- Background and release
- Unlink CD single
- Try to combine the first two sentences, beginning something like this: "A CD single featuring the album version of..."
- The CD's cover art is the same used for Tragic Kingdom's fifth single, "Happy Now?" -> The artwork of the release shares the same as used for the fifth single for Tragic Kingdom, "Happy Now?".
- Composition and music video
- production done -> production process being handled
- record"; he discussed -> record". He went on discussing that
- A studio video -> An accompanying music video
- Try to reword next sentence
- Change name of topic in "Composition and promotion"
- Reception
- Critical -> Critical response
- upon release -> upon its release
- Commercial -> Commercial performance
- You may leave the charting part, as it's too short
- Release history
- Unlink "CD"
- Outcome:
On hold for seven days. Good luck! Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:31, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: Again, thanks for the review. I completed my changes. I would like to collaborate with with on "Heaven", but it seems as if we're having some difficulties with some other users. Anyway, thanks for the review. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 00:23, 14 June 2016 (UTC).
- Passing article! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:41, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.