Talk:Hey Y'all/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 02:57, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

• Should 'honky tonk' have a hyphen?

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 03:49, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

• "had "folded and was absorbed" by" - I think this would work better without the quote, just say what happened

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 03:49, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

• Since you already introduce her quote with "Cook said:", I don't think you need to specify "— Elizabeth Cook, The Standard-Journal", at the bottom of the quote.

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 03:49, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

• I'd wikilink "goes to 11" to Up to eleven

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 03:49, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

• The lead said she was compared "primarily" to Dolly Parton, though the body doesn't expand on this or even repeat it really. It just lists Parton and several other artists together.

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 03:49, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

• "is built . around" - stray period

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 03:49, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

• "the singer's naivety would hinder her success" - does he clarify in what manner she was naive?

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 03:49, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

• "Edd Hurt of the Nashville Scene wrote" - I'd specify when he wrote this

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 03:49, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

Looks good. On hold till issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 02:57, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

• @Freikorp: Thank you for picking this up for a review. I honestly did not think that it would be picked up so quickly. I believe that I have addressed everything! Have a great rest of your week. Aoba47 (talk) 03:49, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

• Haha I had a slow day at work today so I picked up this review and three by other people. Everything looks really good. Happy to pass this now. :) Freikorp (talk) 07:06, 27 June 2018 (UTC)