Talk:Heterophoria

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Is there a way to make the etiology section less pedantic?

The etiololgy section seems to be worded in too complex of a manner and in a tone that sounds like a college lecture. Or at least that is the impression I get. --74.124.187.76 (talk) 04:22, 11 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]