Talk:Herb Slattery/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 15:29, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 13:52, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Added some cats.
"former American" change to "American former football" He didn't really play professionally... so that's probably the best way I guess.
"American Legion League" link to American Legion Baseball?
"his three years with the Fightin' Blue Hens" Shouldn't that say four years?
"selected twice as a first-team All-Middle Atlantic Conference (MAC) " Add to infobox?
"co-Middle Atlantic Conference Most Valuable Player" Change to MAC since it's already in parentheses earlier.
"He was chosen the Eastern College Athletic Conference (ECAC) Division II Player of the Year, co-Middle Atlantic Conference Most Valuable Player and first-team Little All-American by the Associated Press (AP), as well as a first-team All-ECAC player" All of that should go in the infobox too.
"Delaware Athlete of the Year award" Who awarded that?
"Slattery was selected in the 11th round (274th overall) of the 1967 NFL/AFL draft by the American Football League (AFL)'s New York Jets" change to "Slattery was selected by the New York Jets of the American Football League (AFL) in the 11th round, with the 274th overall pick, of the 1967 NFL/AFL draft
"training camp" Link Training camp (NFL).