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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 23:52, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I'll take this. Expect comments up within a week.

OK here we go..... Snuggums (talk / edits) 23:54, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Infobox
Plot
Cast
  • This list needs citations for the roles
Production
Development
Editing
  • The quote "What happened in post was that we edited the movie for ages and finally realized that what Samantha and I had done together wasn't working the right way. It was a really hard realization to come to." could be paraphrased, and it's redundant given the previous quote
Music
Release
  • I'm concerned with the WP:LAYOUT of really short subsections. "Box office" and "Home media" can come before "Critical response" and "accolades". Could copies of DVD's and Blu-ray's sold perhaps be added?
Critical response
Accolades
References
Overall
  • Well-written?
  • Prose quality: Decent, but needs improvements
  • Manual of Style: Almost
  • Verifiable?
  • Reference layout: Several citations aren't properly formatted
  • Reliable sources: A couple questionable references
  • No original research: One unsourced section and some unsupported statements
  • Broad in coverage?
  • Major aspects: Needs some expansion
  • Focused: Nothing of concern
  • Neutral?: Not quite
  • Stable?: No ongoing content disputes, edit wars, or major changes
  • Illustrated, if possible, by images?
  • Appropriate licensing: Image poster has adequate FUR, and cast members photo is from Commons
  • Relevance and captioning: Looks good
@SNUGGUMS: Apologies for how long it took me to get to this, but I've had a hectic week. Hopefully I've met your requirements! Sock (tock talk) 16:11, 13 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
You've done well, Sock. Just need to add more reviews (The current total used, 6, isn't very much) Snuggums (talk / edits) 21:24, 13 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@SNUGGUMS: I'm in the process of doing that right now, I somehow missed that bullet in your listing. Sock (tock talk) 21:41, 13 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Nothing to worry about, just ping me or post on my talk page after you finish that up. I will then do another reference spotcheck. Snuggums (talk / edits) 21:42, 13 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I actually went ahead and added a few reviews myself, and am now passing this article. Congrats! Snuggums (talk / edits) 23:56, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]