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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:49, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- Link the counties in the lede
- Fixed.
- Overlinked Henry II
- Fixed.
- Is William de Courci notable? If so, redlink him.
- Don't know yet, won't until I get around to his son.
- Are there links for the his Sherrifdoms?
- All the sheriffdoms are linked in the first sentence of the first paragraph.
- Sanders or Saunders?
- Sanders - it's fixed. I have this mental thing about putting that extra "u" in ... I blame all the "armour" and "favour"s I have to think about as a yank.
- No DABs.
- External links good.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:49, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- Let me know if there is anything else... Ealdgyth - Talk 11:13, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- Only thing that I caught on this read-through was that Richard I is overlinked. Take care of that and we'll be done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:53, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- Got it. Thanks for catching that! Ealdgyth - Talk 17:37, 3 April 2013 (UTC)