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A fact from Heike Friedrich (wheelchair basketball) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 17 April 2014 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Heike Friedrich played over 200 games of basketball with the national team before switching to wheelchair basketball?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2014/April. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Heike Friedrich (wheelchair basketball).

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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 23:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Let me return you a favor by reviewing your article. Thanks for all the copy edit. This may take some days.TheQ Editor (Talk) 23:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Needs to include about how Friedrich became disabled.
- No. There's a rule about not focusing on disabilities. So that information should not go in the lead. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Needs to include her place of birth.
It was also runner-up - it?
- The team. "It" is the correct pronoun. Changed to "The team". Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

wikilink Holger Glinicki
- Good old Holger. Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps update all her medals from the Achievements section in the "Medal Record" section. (It looks like she won more than two medals)
- Added European championships. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Biography

Might want to divide it into sections.
Needs to include something about her coach.
- Mentioned Holger Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
wikilink "Silver Laurel Leaf"
- Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
by a point should be by one point
- Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Achievements

Wikilink the events if possible.
- They are linked earlier in the article. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Awards

Wikilink if possible.

Images

Explain in more detail about the infobox image.
- What do you want to know? Laura took it at the Gliders and Rollers World Challenge in Sydney in July 2012. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Make the infobox image smaller maybe. (Although not necessary.) It's just taking away some space.
- Using the default size. Don't was to fix it at a specified size because that may cause problems for people with mobile devices. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Other

ref 5 is a dead link.
- Aaargh. To be expected I suppose. Removed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
You may want to look at some reviews for ref 8. The info should be okay but there may be possible malware. [1]
- How strange. The link points to here. Check your machine. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

That's basically all what I can find. TheQ Editor (Talk) 00:22, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

All points addressed. Thanks for your review! Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Nice, I've helped you specified the image caption, now it's a GA.

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