Talk:Hebron Church (Intermont, West Virginia)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 00:05, 3 September 2015 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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@West Virginian: I will start a comprehensive review this article. Thanks, --Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 00:05, 3 September 2015 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• Citations are unecessary.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 00:05, 3 September 2015 (UTC)

• Tomandjerry211 (alt) and Tomandjerry211, thank you for your review of this article! I've removed the inline citation from the date in the template, but because the NRHP number is not in the article, I've kept the inline citation next to it, as is standard with NRHP property articles on Wikipedia. Thank you for the suggestion! -- West Virginian (talk) 08:21, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

Body

• 4 citations for one point seems too much

• Tomandjerry211 (alt) and Tomandjerry211, I've whittled these down to one citation. -- West Virginian (talk) 08:21, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

• Duplicate link to "Wardensville"

• Tomandjerry211 (alt) and Tomandjerry211, I've delinked Wardensville. -- West Virginian (talk) 08:21, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

• It is unecessary to put cites like this: "The sun is hot.[1] The sun is red.[1]"

• Tomandjerry211 (alt) and Tomandjerry211, I've removed many of the duplicate inline citations. Please take a look and let me know if you have any other comments or questions. Thanks! -- West Virginian (talk) 08:21, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

References

• "of the pdf" is an unecessary suffix

• Tomandjerry211 (alt) and Tomandjerry211, I've placed this in there based on previous review input. The NRHP nomination form has a strange page numbering scheme based on the form's sections, so for consistency's sake for the reader, I've added "of the PDF" so they know the page number refers to the order of the pages in the PDF versus the section numbers. Let me know if this is a deal breaker. -- West Virginian (talk) 08:21, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

• Standardize hyphens in the isbns in the refs

• Tomandjerry211 (alt) and Tomandjerry211, done! -- West Virginian (talk) 08:21, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

• Add isbns or oclcs for the sources that don't.

• Tomandjerry211 (alt) and Tomandjerry211, the two sources without ISBNs and OCLCs do not have either. One is the NHRP nomination form, and the other is an excerpt of a magazine article. -- West Virginian (talk) 08:21, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

• Standardize locations in the refs.

• Tomandjerry211 (alt) and Tomandjerry211, the locations are already standardized. Because Arlington is a County and not a city, it is listed as Arlington County, Virginia. -- West Virginian (talk) 08:21, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 00:05, 3 September 2015 (UTC)

• Tomandjerry211 (alt) and Tomandjerry211, thank you again for engaging in this review. Please let me know if you have any outstanding issues or addition questions and comments. Thanks again! I look forward to your review of Robert White (West Virginia senator). -- West Virginian (talk) 08:21, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

• • Passing, well done!--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 11:42, 4 September 2015 (UTC)
    • Tomandjerry211 (alt) and Tomandjerry211, thank you again for this review! I look forward to working with you again soon! -- West Virginian (talk) 13:26, 4 September 2015 (UTC)