Talk:Heavy Crown (song)/GA2

GA Review

Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:57, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 01:57, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Shouldn't a release date be included in here? Including the date of the reissued album would be fine by me

•  Done

• I don't know how it's exactly credited in the liner notes, but would you credit The Invisible Men as writers, or the three men that make up the trio?

• I'm inclined to credit them as the trio, like how it's presented in the liner notes of the album. The same way that I've credited 'Iggy Azalea', not 'Amythest Kelly'.

Lead

• I didn't find any mistakes, but could the lead be broken into two smaller paragraphs? It's matter of personal preference I guess

•  Done

Background

• The first sentence's use of 'which' sounds a bit redundant; could this possibly be reworded?

•  Done

• You could remove 'also' in the sentence that begins with: "On 14 November..."

•  Done

Composition

Looks very good to me; nothing to change here :)

Critical reception

Paragraph 2

• Would you link Idolator here? Probably not, since it was linked in the composition section...

• Yeah, I'm a one link-per article kinda editor.

References

I double checked each source to see if any had the overlinking (like you mentioned on Baby Don't Lie's article) and everything looked fantastic

• Thankyou!

GA

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail: Put on hold

End of GA Review:

I definitely think this article should pass GA; I don't see anything wrong with it. You've outdone yourself on this article, but I would like you to see what I had to say before passing it. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 23:26, 4 March 2016 (UTC)

• Thankyou for your comments and kind words, I've addressed your concerns above. Azealia911 _talk 07:50, 5 March 2016 (UTC)