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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 10:49, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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@IndianBio: Any chance you'll get to this soon? Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:23, 8 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

What about tomorrow?
@IndianBio: Today will be perfect Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:33, 9 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Infobox and lead
  • I don't see Dance-pop being sourced in the article body?
  • The bit about the critical reception in the lead, if it uses quoted words from the prose below, it would need the source adjacent to it to comply WP:V. —IB [ Poke ] 12:40, 14 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • it was shot by John Perez in Shangri-La, Mauritius in April 2016 --> Not clear referring to the teaser or the main vid. I would say remove the teaser part from lead.
  • The clip portrays Inna interacting with the locals of a seaside resort community, with her also being present at a party and a boat trip with her love interest played by Olivier Phineas Boissard. --> The clip portrays Inna with the locals of a seaside resort, at a party, and also a boat trip with her love interest played by Olivier Phineas Boissard.
  • Bulgaria is part of WP:BADCHARTS. Please remove.
  • number 151 for Russia.

More to come. —IB [ Poke ] 12:40, 14 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@IndianBio: I see you're very busy. If you want to, I can ask someone else to review this. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:32, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.