Talk:Heartfire

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Plot summary

The tone of the plot summary is somewhat informal, and it's also a bit vague. Could somebody clean it up, please? It also needs to be trimmed for length. --Tony Sidaway 15:54, 25 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]