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GA Review

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Reviewer: Eurohunter (talk · contribs) 19:26, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Iaof2017: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter (talk) 19:26, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  1. "It was penned" - is that correct? Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  2. I think it's better to mention New Zealand instead of Croatian chart and same for section "Reception". Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Background and composition

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  1. Duration of song not mentioned. Eurohunter (talk) 11:20, 12 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

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  1. I don't think that two words "original creation" and the "best preview" needs quotation - you meantion that "characterised the song as an". Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

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  1. "It begins with a close-up shot of a rotating CD" - how is that CD? It's clearly vinyl. That's what happen if you describe music video without using sources. Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Track listing

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  1. Add Template:Track listing and release dates. Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Other

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  1. Remixes and its release not mentioned in the text. Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  1. There is no introduction to previous "I'm Good (Blue)" and next single "Call On Me". Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  1. There is a problem with reference 3 and 31 and not all references has link to archived version. Eurohunter (talk) 21:51, 12 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  1. @Iaof2017: There is error in reference 3 and 31. Eurohunter (talk) 19:43, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Reference 2 - it's Warner Music Australia. Eurohunter (talk) 19:43, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  2. Reference 10 - there is no link to Rolling Stone and possible same situation in other references. Eurohunter (talk) 19:44, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Replace parameter "Work" or "Publisher" with "Website" in references. Eurohunter (talk) 19:44, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Summary

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Every major problem was fixed. Iaof2017 (talk) 22:32, 18 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]