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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:52, 24 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I am reunited with you for this review! --K. Peake 07:52, 24 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Only keep dance and hip hop in the infobox, per the others only being sourced as elements
  • "Musically, it is an" → "It is an"
  • "Its lyrics explore a" → "The lyrics explore a"
  • "and peaked at" → "while peaking at"

Background and composition

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  • "Musically, it is an" → "Musically, "Heart Attack" is an"
  • Where is the dance genre sourced?
Removed. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "to have his significant other" → the source mentions "all to himself", so reword to add something similar

Reception

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  • "received positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
  • songtexte.de should not be italicised
  • hiphop.de should not be italicised
  • "deemed it an" → "deemed the song an"
  • laut.de should not be italicised
  • The laut.de ref appears to source animates instead of motivates and the calm down part says "Only Loredana manages to slow him down", per my translator
  • "including number three in" → "reaching number three in"
  • [13][14][15] should be ordered to correspond with the countries listed

Music video

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  • Img looks good!
  • "before a petrol station" are you sure this is appropriate terminology?
Do you have a suggestion? Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "in the city of Durrës, Albania, and along" → "in Durrës and along"

Charts

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks incredible at 4.8%!!!!
  • Fix citations 1, 2 and 4 for ref 1 since the titles are different from what you have wrote them as here
  • What exactly makes ref 4 a reliable source?
Replaced by a new source. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Final comments and verdict

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Hello Kyle Peake hope you're having a good summer. I've responded to all of the issues with few comments from my side. Cheers! Iaof2017 (talk) 11:08, 25 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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