Talk:Healthcare in Nicaragua/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"Healthcare in Nicaragua involves the collaboration of private and public institutions." so is like every health care system? have something more specific? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"While communicable diseases such as dengue, chikunguya, and Zika continue to persist as national health concerns" of the three, why is Zika capitalized? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Add more to the pre-1979 history. You only have two paragraphs for the first 150 years of health care in Nicaragua. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"Following the wake of the Revolution" why is the "Revolution" capitalized? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"Since the 1990s the Nicaraguan government has been changing towards more market-oriented economic policies that have affected the health sector. This healthcare shift has involved increased private sector activity as well as the decentralization of public services.[3]" any statistics? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
" Levels include (1) the central level, (2) the SILAIS (Local Systems of Comprehensive Care) level, and (3) the municipal level." spell out numbers or make a formal listed, I've never seen a Wikipedia article describe parts of a system (in this case the levels) like this before. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
" As determined by Nicaragua's General Law of Health (No. 423) the overall aim of MOSAFC is to establish integrated networks of public and private service providers that work together to harbor the responsibility of addressing the health needs of specific populations.[17] " some wikilinks here at the start of the sentence would be nice. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"In 2008, WHO reported that 55.5% of the population was overweight and 22.2% classified as obese,[23] and trends reveal that obesity rates are steadily rising.[24]" any chilhood obesity figures? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Any more stats on stuff like cardiovascular disease or high blood pressure that could go in the chronic diseases section? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"In order to reduce false community beliefs and fears about tuberculosis that could be feeding into this social stigma, various solutions have been proposed and attempted in communities throughout the country." source? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Couldn't any more diseases be added to the communicable diseases section? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"In Latin America, stigma and discrimination against HIV/AIDS serve as barriers to effective responses and are linked to social inequalities associated with gender, living status, and sexuality.[31] One study found that while 90% of Nicaraguan adolescents would accept and care for a family member with HIV/AIDS, only 69% would tell anyone else if they got diagnosed as HIV-infected and only 46% would share food with someone who was infected.[30] Nine years following the detection of the first HIV case in Nicaragua, the Nicaraguan government instituted Law 238 to protect the rights of those infected with HIV/AIDS in regards to confidentiality, access to healthcare, and nondiscrimination,[32] setting the precedent for future intervention strategies focused on decreasing AIDs stigma amongst various professionals, including health care workers." typo at the end and source? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Use cite templates for all references. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Given the unsourced statements and the fact this appears to be missing some info, I will fail the article. The writing in generally could also be more formal, but that should probably be dealt with once the article is closer to complete content wise. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 08:53, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]