Talk:Head Control System

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Encyclopedia tone

"So it would be prudent to approach their music with caution as it does take advantage of the brain’s opening to the catchy grooves and straight rock vibes to make way for all kinds of disturbing noises and frequencies, cleverly disguised among the melodic tapestries, that may get directly into the listener’s head."

Sounds like a fantastic advertisement, but doesn't belong in an encyclopedia entry, particularly "into the listener's head". Dfinch 06:46, 10 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Tone revised and corrected. Tag removed (again). AllGore 14:42, 30 January 2006

Tone

Re-adding Inappropriate tone header; this page reads like a press release.

I agree: The verbiage in this article is more appropriate for a press release. It is a mystery what a standard reader could possibly glean from this well crafted non-sense. Rintrah 10:27, 28 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I have modified the style, but it still reads like a press release — albeit, one written by an alcoholic rather than someone on acid. Or, if you prefer, I transported my subliminal constructions to the frenetic medium of letters. 14:49, 17 September 2006 (UTC)

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