Talk:Hazel Miner/GA1

GA Reassessment

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Hey, I'm reassessing this article for GA sweeps, to being old GA articles up to standard. This is most a good article, though there are a couple issues that keep it from still being one:

Refs #10 and 11 are dead links (the two with URLs).
The lead needs some expansion so that it summarizes the article.
Quotes need to be cited right after they end (or the end of the sentence). There's a couple that don't.
"Today the story of Hazel and her actions during the 1920 blizzard are also studied by some elementary school children in North Dakota as part of a state-mandated "Our State" class." Cite needed.

I'll give five days for these issues to be fixed. If done, it remains a GA, if not it doesn't. Not too much to fix up at least. Wizardman 01:38, 19 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

No changes have been made, so unfortunately it's delisted. Wizardman 03:48, 27 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]