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Nominator: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 18:50, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: QuicoleJR (talk · contribs) 13:23, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
I will take this one. QuicoleJR (talk) 13:23, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
@Kung Fu Man: I have completed my first pass over the article. It is overall very well-written, and I only have a few things I would like fixed.
First introduced in the video games Pokémon Red and Blue,
This information does not appear in the body. I know it’s obvious, but it should still have a source.Standing 5 ft 3 in (160 cm) tall,
I hate to be pedantic, but it is a little weird reading that when Haunter doesn't stand at all.- The first paragraph of the Appearances section is a little random with which games it mentions. Are those the only games it appears in?
- You’re probably used to me saying this by now, but there are a lot of quotes in the Reception section. Could you please try to paraphrase a couple of them?
This article passes the spotcheck. Again, great work! QuicoleJR (talk) 14:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC)