Talk:Haslemere/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:01, 25 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this after Boxing Day. ♦ jaguar 18:01, 25 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I couldn't help but note the lead neglects to mention Grayswood. Is there anything to mention about it? Otherwise it summarises the article perfectly
"85 ha (210 acres) of which is classified as Ancient Woodland" - I'm not sure if ancient woodland is capitalised, though I might be wrong
"To the east of Haslemere town and Graywsood" - town is redundant here
"a group of workmen was drinking in the Kings Arms pub" - were
"In 2021, the GP surgery serving the town is at Haslemere Health Centre, in Church Lane" - how about As of 2021?
"In 2021, the hospital functions as a community hospital" - this will be redundant as time goes on. Try Presently, the hospital...
It's best to write out First/Second World War fully in the 'War memorials' subsection (as opposed to WWI/WWII)

After reading through the article I can't find anything to hold it back, so an outright pass is bestowed. It is comprehensive, reads well, and the sources are all in good order. I enjoyed reading it - I had no idea Hindhead was in Haslemere parish. I congratulate you on all the good work you've done with these Surrey towns - a FAC could be a possibility... ♦ jaguar 20:25, 29 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Awesome!! Thanks @Jaguar: for your very thorough review. I wish you the very best for your new job and hope you'll be able to find time to contribute to Wikipedia when you are off duty! Thanks also to @SovalValtos:, @Murgatroyd49: and @Tony Holkham: for their support and feedback. Happy New Year to All!!! Mertbiol (talk) 21:08, 30 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]