Talk:Happy Now? (No Doubt song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:23, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

1997, as a -> 1997 as a
production handled -> production process being handled

This sounds a bit too wordy to me

of the parent -> of its parent
one calling -> one of them calling
I think you should remove the last sentence, as it sounds biased

I reworded it since the sentence was (unfortunately) the truth

Background and release

the second sentence is too long

Reworded

Again, remove the charting information
The CD single -> A CD single featuring the song
the LP version -> the album version
a Sublime cover of -> a cover of Sublime's
CD includes -> CD featured
would later be used -> would be later used

Composition and lyrics

the guitar lead -> its guitar-driven lead
The second sentence is excesive
lyrics, that -> lyrics that
Remove "All by yourself / You have no one else"

Since it was included in the review, I thought it necessary to be included here; I have reworded it

Critical reception

upon release -> upon its release
who wrote for The A.V. Club -> writing for The A.V. Club,
blog, similarly -> blog similarly

Release history

Unlink "CD single"

Outcome: On hold for seven days. Good luck! Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: Thanks for your review as always; I have finished making changes! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 00:16, 14 June 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Passing article! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:50, 14 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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