Talk:Hanukkah/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Catrìona (talk · contribs) 22:07, 11 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your work on this article. Unfortunately, I don't think it meets the GA criteria at this time, due to the number of {{citation needed}} cleanup tags as well as unreferenced sentences, paragraphs, and sections. Also, per WP:EL, I think it would be preferable not to link externally scripture (especially in Hebrew) in text. Instead, consider linking to Wikipedia articles on books/chapters of scripture, for instance 2 Maccabees or John 10. I encourage you to clean up the references and external links and resubmit to GAN for consideration. Best regards. Catrìona (talk) 22:07, 11 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]