Check for Provide an accessible overview (MOS:INTRO): Done
Major Point 1: Background and composition "The first disc serves as the soundtrack album for the second season of the television series Hannah Montana, while the second disc serves as the debut studio album by its primary actress Miley Cyrus. All twenty tracks are performed by Cyrus, although the first disc is credited to her titular character Hannah Montana. In the vein of the original soundtrack Hannah Montana (2006), Hannah Montana 2: Meet Miley Cyrus is primarily a teen pop record, which sees additional influences from pop rock musical styles. The lyrical themes revolve largely around "girl power", teen romance, and the double life that Cyrus' character lives on the program." (summarised well in the lead)
Major Point 2: Singles and promotion ""Nobody's Perfect" was released as the only single from Hannah Montana 2 on May 15, 2007. The track peaked at number 27 on the U.S. Billboard Hot 100. "See You Again" was later released as the lead single from Meet Miley Cyrus. It reached number 10 on the Billboard Hot 100, becoming Cyrus' first single to enter the top ten on the chart. Its follow-up single "Start All Over" peaked at number 68 in the United States. The soundtrack was further promoted with Cyrus' headlining Best of Both Worlds Tour." (summarised well in the lead)
Major Point 3: Critical reception "Hannah Montana 2: Meet Miley Cyrus received generally mixed reviews from music critics, who were ambivalent towards its overall production and questioned Cyrus' ability to establish a career separate from the series. It debuted at number one on the U.S. Billboard 200 with first-week sales of 326,000 copies, and has since been certified quadruple-platinum by the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) for exceeding shipments of four million units. The album charted moderately on national record charts throughout Europe and Oceania." (summarised well in the lead)
Major Point 4: Commercial performance "" (not a concise summary of the corresponding section in the body)
Check for Relative emphasis: Done
Major Point 1: Background and composition "The first disc serves as the soundtrack album for the second season of the television series Hannah Montana, while the second disc serves as the debut studio album by its primary actress Miley Cyrus. All twenty tracks are performed by Cyrus, although the first disc is credited to her titular character Hannah Montana. In the vein of the original soundtrack Hannah Montana (2006), Hannah Montana 2: Meet Miley Cyrus is primarily a teen pop record, which sees additional influences from pop rock musical styles. The lyrical themes revolve largely around "girl power", teen romance, and the double life that Cyrus' character lives on the program." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
Major Point 2: Singles and promotion ""Nobody's Perfect" was released as the only single from Hannah Montana 2 on May 15, 2007. The track peaked at number 27 on the U.S. Billboard Hot 100. "See You Again" was later released as the lead single from Meet Miley Cyrus. It reached number 10 on the Billboard Hot 100, becoming Cyrus' first single to enter the top ten on the chart. Its follow-up single "Start All Over" peaked at number 68 in the United States. The soundtrack was further promoted with Cyrus' headlining Best of Both Worlds Tour." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
Major Point 3: Critical reception "Hannah Montana 2: Meet Miley Cyrus received generally mixed reviews from music critics, who were ambivalent towards its overall production and questioned Cyrus' ability to establish a career separate from the series. It debuted at number one on the U.S. Billboard 200 with first-week sales of 326,000 copies, and has since been certified quadruple-platinum by the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) for exceeding shipments of four million units. The album charted moderately on national record charts throughout Europe and Oceania." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
Major Point 4: Commercial performance "" (the lead does not give due weight as is given in the body)
I'm glad to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article:
I think the lead can be improved in order to provide an accessible overview and to give relative emphasis for the Commercial performance.
Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. WikiRedactor, please feel free to strike out any recommendation from this review which you think will not help in improving the article which is our main aim here. All the best, --Seabuckthorn♥16:20, 11 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much for picking up a bunch of my reviews! I went back and added some more detail about its commercial performance in the introduction, and I will go back and add more if you'd like! WikiRedactor (talk) 20:19, 11 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]