Talk:Hang with Me/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Novice7 (talk) 10:43, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing the article. — Novice7 (talk) 10:43, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Basic checks

No Dab links.
One redirect link. Rolling Stone links change their address sometimes. Try archiving the link using WebCite and add it to the article (using "archiveurl" and "archivedate" field).

Done

The cover art Image:Robyn - Hang with Me.jpg is a little big. Reduce it to 300 × 300 pixels.

Done

The sound sample File:Robyn Hang with Me.OGG looks good.

Prose review will be added in shortly. — Novice7 (talk) 11:28, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

taken from her sixth studio album, Body Talk Pt. 2 – maybe year of the album should be included in brackets?

Done

It was released as the album's lead single on 16 August 2010 in Sweden. – comma after "in"

Done

An acoustic version of the song had previously been released on Body Talk Pt. 1 in June 2010. – is it "released"? Shouldn't it be "included"? Also, comma afrer Pt. 1

Done

It also reached the top ten in Norway and on the US Hot Dance Club Songs chart. – better if you expand and write "United States" instead of US, as it is its first occurrence. Also, remove the "on" after "and".

Done

Background

"Hang with Me" was originally recorded by Klas Åhlund's ex-wife, Paola Bruna – ex-wife -> the-wife.

Sorry, it is "then-wife". — Novice7 (talk) 06:16, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comma after Stockcity Girl.

Done

Maybe you should add something like "In an interview with Kyle Anderson of MTV Newsroom, Robyn said of the song.."

I believe that quote was originally from Robyn's website. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It's okay then. — Novice7 (talk) 06:16, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Also, link Bonbon?

Done

Last sentence of the paragraph "released" to "included" or "featured".

Done

Composition

The song carries similar "anthemic, emotional beats" of "Cry When You Get Older" from Body Talk Pt. 1,[7] and similar musical structure to that of the Pet Shop Boys. please rewrite.

Done

As the lyrics of the song have been quoted, provide a source for that (as in In the chorus, Robyn sings "Just don't fall recklessly, headlessly in love with me.")

Done

Critical reception

He concluded, saying, "it would.. -> He concluded by saying that it would "quoted material excluding it would".

Done

Is stereogum reliable? Can you find another review?

Removed. Will see if I can find another review. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Chart performance

Please provide references to show the song's debut (as in Denmark).

Done

remove "chart" after Billboard.

Done

Music video

Again, stereogum.

Removed. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

She chose to perform the song because the show's producers asked for it a little re-write would be better :)

Done

Tracklisting

Provide language parameter for iTunes Store links

Done

Credits

Change the credits to [Person] – [credit]

Is it necessary? Klas Åhlund did, like, everything on the song :P Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

LOL! i totally misunderstood xD

Done. Pancake (talk) 13:13, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lol, it's okay :D — Novice7 (talk) 06:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

Good

References

Ref 9 missing publisher (work =Rolling Stone)
Ref 12 missing publisher
Ref 29 same thing as above

All done. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Overall, a good article. — Novice7 (talk) 11:28, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Last comments

Mention the duration of the sample on the description (like A 22-second sample).

Done

I actually started liking the song. It's a great article. Just look through and see that all errors are fixed. I'll be happy to pass it then. — Novice7 (talk) 06:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

OK, all errors are fixed now! :)Pancake (talk) 14:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Happy to pass! :) — Novice7 (talk) 14:57, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]