Talk:Hands All Over (Maroon 5 song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 21:20, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- 3 uncategorized redirects
- Ref1 title is "Maroon 5 Announce 2010 North American Tour and New Album “Hands All Over”" and the publisher should be Maroon5.com, not Maroon 5.
- CBS Interactive is the publisher of Metacritic./
- I've gone through the article and found only a few prose issues, that I have fixed myself. There is one thing, however: The critical reception section needs to be changed up a bit, for example, "Tamlyn Stewart of Bay of Plenty Times wrote that the song" is used too much as format. Try changing it up like: "Writing for the Bay of Plenty Times, Tamlyn Stewart said that the song" (for example).
All issues resolved. Passed. — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:55, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
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