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Reviewer:  (talk · contribs) 04:07, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Happy to review this article. Haven't heard this song or any by Marina, so I hope this will be a completely subjective review, (talk) 04:07, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • the climate change crisis I think "climate change" should be enough
 Done
  • The rest is good!
Thanks

Background and release

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  • I think a link to Benelux should be helpful because not all readers know what that is (like me)
 Done

Music and lyrics

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  • I'd consider removing Medium because it's user-generated and thus not reliable
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  • I'd also consider removing Musicnotes.com because the site's reliability has been increasingly questioned
  • Instrumentation for the track is provided by Little, who contributed with keyboards, synths, percussion, and drums. The song was mixed by Dan Greece-Marguerat at Solar Management Limited in London, and engineered by Little. Mastering of the track was handled by Dave Kutch at The Mastering Palace in New York City Shouldn't this be included in the previous section instead?
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Reception

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  • What is return to form single?
Modified quote.
  • and recommended the track to readers sounds like filler
Removed.
  • Avoid one-sentence paragraphs, like the Guardian review bit
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Overall

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Thank you for the review. I believe I addressed all of your comments above or through my edits to the article. I removed Medium as a source per your recommendation but I kept the Musicnotes source because I was able to verify that the sheet music I referenced is, in fact, the legitimate official source. However, I purchased the physical sheet music as well and could manually cite that instead if you'd prefer. Thanks for the review and let me know if there is anything else I can do. Carbrera (talk) 16:08, 11 December 2020 (UTC).[reply]
Happy to pass this GAN. Great job with the article, (talk) 03:29, 12 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]