Talk:Han Bong-zin/GA1

GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:21, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:06, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 19:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Will review soon. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"had a cap total" Link cap.
"as part of the Group 4" Not sure "the" is needed.
"He was interviewed as one of the seven surviving members of the 1966 North Korean team in the documentary The Game of Their Lives and visited Middlesbrough with his former teammates" When did all this happen?
I was expecting to find more than that since I don't know much about soccer, so nice work. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 17:09, 28 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @WikiOriginal-9: Linked cap, removed 'the', etc; I also re-arranged the later life section a little to date the interview statement and note that he won the title of Merited Athlete. Do you think it looks alright? Thanks, BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:03, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  That looks good now. You've probably scrounged up all there is out there about this guy. North Korean sources are hard to find for obvious reasons. Great work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:18, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@BeanieFan11: Just one more thing, is there a reason the infobox says 53+? Is that the same things as caps? ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:24, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: It is the cap number. He played a minimum of 53 international matches – some sources conflict, hence the '+' as there could be more, but it was at least that. BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:28, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@BeanieFan11: The body has a minimum of 49? ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:14, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: It was 49 before the World Cup. 49 + 4 games at the World Cup = 53. BeanieFan11 (talk) 18:26, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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