Talk:Hamilton Fish Park/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Comments
[edit]- Short description goes at the top.
- Add alt text to every image being used.
- "restored again" → "restored"
- "facades made" → "facades are made"
- Remove the comma after "pool entrances".
- "mayor Robert" → "Mayor Robert"
- "bee reopened" - typo?
- "a NYC Parks" → "an NYC Parks"
- "wading pool; and" → "wading pool, and"
- "at a cost of" → "for" (less wordy)
- "New York City, it was" → "New York City, was"
- Wikilink Edith Evans Asbury and Amy Sohn.
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- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 04:56, 10 July 2021 (UTC)