Talk:Hamdi Qandil/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemurbaby (talk · contribs) 17:53, 20 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Comments

I read this through, and after a quick minor copy edit I think it's met GA standards. I'd only recommend adding more info on his earlier wives and any children he might have had, if you can find this info. Nice work! Lemurbaby (talk) 17:53, 20 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Believe me I tried, but no luck in English language sources and I can't read Arabic :( Thanks for reviewing this article though, I'm glad you were able to do it in such a short period of time. Cheers! --Al Ameer 22:14, 20 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]