Talk:Habitation and Logistics Outpost

A fact from Habitation and Logistics Outpost appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 14 February 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that HALO will orbit the Moon?

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 03:38, 9 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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... that HERMES will live on board the Habitation and Logistics Outpost in orbit of the moon? Source: https://spacenews.com/nasa-to-sole-source-gateway-habitation-module-to-northrop-grumman/
- ALT1... that HERMES will live on HALO?
- ALT2... that HALO will orbit the moon?

Created by Seddon (talk). Self-nominated at 23:34, 6 January 2022 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing:
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: - There is a low likelihood of copyright violation, so it passes on that count. However, sources like "Heliophysics Division HERMES Instrument Update" (PDF). nasa.gov. should be marked as being in the public domain if applicable.

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems: - The current hook works but I think it could be even better. It may be worth saying simply "...that HERMES will live on HALO?".

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Nice work Seddon. I just had a couple of questions above. Epicgenius (talk) 17:40, 7 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Epicgenius: thanks for the review! I added the pd domain note on the HERMES presentation. I also suggested another ALT which plays on the HALO name. Seddon ^talk 21:45, 7 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the response. All three hooks look good to go now. Epicgenius (talk) 02:23, 8 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Seddon and Epicgenius:

looks like a couple of paragraphs are missing sources entirely—could this be cleared up before I promote? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 16:37, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Seddon, various one-sentences paragraphs in §Heliophysics Environmental and Radiation Measurement Experiment Suite (HERMES) and §European Radiation Sensors Array (ERSA) are still missing citations. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:21, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Kavyansh.Singh and Theleekycauldron:

Done -- Seddon ^talk 02:48, 1 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Approving as now sourced. SL93 (talk) 01:47, 8 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

ALT2 to T:DYK/P1

How was it originally planned to launch HALO to NHRO

Before it was decided to launch HALO with PPE on Falcon Heavy, how were the modules planned to be sent to NRHO ? Was it on SLS ? - Rod57 (talk) 13:01, 21 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Need mass of HALO module

PPE module, that HALO will be launched with, says 5,000 kg, but no mass here for HALO module. - Rod57 (talk) 19:25, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Schedule, when PDR and CDR ?

When was Preliminary Design Review (PDR) due, and was it passed ? When is Critical Design Review (CDR) due ? Can we link the relevant docs to confirm details ? - Rod57 (talk) Rod57 (talk) 19:36, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]