Talk:HMS Thunderer (1872)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:16, 21 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this shortly. JAGUAR 11:16, 21 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

"and gained a reputation as a unlucky ship for several years afterward" - an unlucky ship
"The ship was assigned to the Portsmouth Reserve in January 1888 before beginning a major modernization" - modernisation
"The Devastation-class ships had a complete wrought iron waterline armour belt that was 12 inches thick" - convert to mertic
- Done in the armament section.
No dead links
" of wrought iron armour at the muzzle" - muzzle is a dab link
"The muzzle-loading gun had been double-loaded following a misfire" - misfire is a dab link
- True, but the last entry is the actual definition that I'm referring to.

Too bad this isn't HMS Thunder Child!! On hold. JAGUAR 14:35, 21 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Isn't it though! Thanks for reviewing this.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:52, 21 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Sadly it's the closest thing we can get to Thunder Child. I actually listened to it whilst reviewing this! Anyway, with all of the issues out of the way, this can be promoted

JAGUAR 21:08, 21 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]