Talk:HMS Shalimar

HMS Shalimar has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: June 4, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:39, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

1. Prose On hold

2. Verifiability On hold

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

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Consider linking minesweeper
Be consistent with Strait of Malacca and Malacca Strait; unless I'm an idiot and they're different bodies of water, the name used should be consistent. You also use Straits of Malacca
"then sank a coaster two day later" --> "then sank a coaster two days later"

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The final paragraph of the article is completely uncited.

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Good work, placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 23:19, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done all. Will be doing your review soon. L293D (☎ • ✎) 02:54, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]