Talk:HMS Savage (G20)/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:57, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "town of Burton on Trent" Burton-on-Trent or Burton upon Trent.
- Done.
- Is there a link for "adopted"?
- Unfortunately not.
- "new 4.5 inches" should be
adj=on
- Done.
- " the QF Mk III forward and two single QF Mk IV " these two link to the same article.
- Duplicate removed.
- "Operations Camera and Operation Governor" links?
- Unfortunately not. I have replaced this with a bit more context.
- "from Gibraltar to Scapa Flow" links?
- Done.
- "the Battle of North Cape" _the_ North Cape.
- Done.
- "purchased in the Flotilla and" not the full formal name so just "flotilla" suffices.
- Done.
- "615 tons of oil" avoid starting sentences with nuermals.
- Reworded.
- "new 4.5 inches (114 mm" see above.
- Done.
- "twin QF Mk III mounted forward and two single QF Mk IV mounted" likewise.
- Done.
- "Hazemeyer mounts" what are they? Link?
- Added link.
- "Newcastle upon Tyne on " comma after Tyne.
- Done.
- "town of Burton on Trent" see above.
- Done.
- Operation Camera/Governor links?
- Unfortunately not.
- Link Gibraltar and Scarpa Flow.
- Done.
- Wartime service table could use a caption and row/col scopes per MOS:DTT for screen readers etc.
- Done.
- "Battle of North Cape" section and links, its "Battle of the North Cape".
- Done.
- "December the Admiralty signalled" overlinked.
- Removed.
- "cruisers HMS Belfast and" linked to a redirect.
- Fixed.
- "radar directed" hyphenate.
- Done.
- "star shells" what are they?
- Added wikilink.
- Link Portsmouth/Chatham, I imagine you are referring to the docks there, rather than the towns.
- Yes. Added wikilinks
- "Tirpitz, 1942-1944" en-dash.
- Done.
- "Disarmament, 1942-1947" en-dash.
- Done.
That's all for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:20, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Thank you for a comprehensive review. I have made amendments. Please take another look. simongraham (talk) 20:30, 3 September 2021 (UTC)