Talk:HMS Menace (1915)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 21:30, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:55, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Image appropriately licensed
Link launched in the lede
- Added link.
but recorded no hits Suggest changing this to "made a series of unsuccessful attacks" earlier in the sentence
- Moved.
It transpired that the German warships did not exist. Awkward. Suggest integrating this into the sentence about why the extra speed was desired
- Amended.
What are the boilers feeding to the turbines?
- Clarified.
Add the sale date to the infobox
- Added.
comma after Strongbow--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:38, 17 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Clarified.

@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. I believe the changes are made. simongraham (talk) 08:16, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]