Talk:HMS Maenad (1915)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Hog Farm _Talk 03:01, 21 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Thehistorianisaac (talk · contribs) 09:42, 8 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

New reviewer needed

The original review was reverted; a new reviewer is needed to start from scratch and do a complete review according to the GA criteria. Thank you very much. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:22, 10 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Simongraham and BlueMoonset: - I'll take a look at this. Hog Farm _Talk 15:40, 15 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. I look forward to your insights. simongraham (talk)

"However, the German's recorded no loss" - I'm certainly no master of punctuation and am not quite confident to just remove it myself, but I don't think the apostrophe is warranted
- Good spot. I have amended this to remove the ambiguity.
The Jutland artwork - if possible, I think it would be helpful to indicate in the caption if Maenad is the vessel partially seen in the foreground or the shadowy vessels in the background
- It seems to be the one on the foreground. Amended.
Campbell isn't used, remove or move to further reading
- I have reread the relevant parts in Campbell and added some hopefully interesting facts.

I'll try to do some spotchecks later. Hog Farm _Talk 16:33, 15 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. In the interim, I believe that I have made the edits as suggested. simongraham (talk) 12:37, 20 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

No issues from a spot-check perspective and the additions from Campbell look fine. Passing. Hog Farm _Talk 03:00, 21 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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