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Talk:HMS King George V (1911)/GA1

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 19:26, 29 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Criteria
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    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY
  • 3
    3.a checkY
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  • No DAB links checkY
  • No Copyvio checkY
  • No Dead Links checkY

Prose suggestions

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  • "King George V class was powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines, " perhaps "ships of the King George V class were powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines," or else simply the King George Vs were powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines.
  • "By April 1917, the 4-inch guns had been removed from the hull casemates as they were frequently unusable in heavy seas." Might wish to add in salutary in front of "4 inch guns".
  • That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:06, 29 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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