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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:00, 5 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Might as well grab this one as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:00, 5 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again. Parsecboy (talk) 19:23, 5 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • No DABs, External links OK
  • Images appropriately licensed
  • Link mined in the infobox
  • Explain or link caliber in the lead.
    • Linked
  • she was transferred to the Dardanelles Campaign Rephrase as it's literally impossible
    • Done
  • Link commissioned, coastal artillery, mine, guard ship
    • All done
  • With attempts to tow her having failed, she was abandoned with most of her crew having been successfully evacuated, and eventually sank. Awkward, possibly split?
    • See how I reworded it
  • earlier class, the same high speed needs an "and" or something
    • Added
  • Change enlisted men to the British equivalent, "ratings"
    • Good catch
  • provide metric conversions in diameter for the various pounder guns
    • Done
  • main battery turrets sides surplus "s" in turrets?
    • Fixed
  • side-plate damage Do you mean hull?
    • Sure
  • Malta on 5 October 1905. She underwent a refit at Malta after her grounding, and a second refit there Suggest swapping the "there" at the sentence with the second Malta to avoid close conjunction syndrome
    • Works for me
  • Irresistible transferred to the Channel Fleet was transferred
    • Done
  • counter fire from Irresistible forced the Ottomans to check their fire, knocking out two guns in the process Awkward
    • Reworded slightly
  • Fix the conversion for 8 inch guns
    • Done
  • began to fail suggest malfunction--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:30, 27 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]