Talk:HMS Irresistible (1898)/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:00, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
Might as well grab this one as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:00, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks again. Parsecboy (talk) 19:23, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
- No DABs, External links OK
- Images appropriately licensed
- Link mined in the infobox
- Explain or link caliber in the lead.
- Linked
- she was transferred to the Dardanelles Campaign Rephrase as it's literally impossible
- Done
- Link commissioned, coastal artillery, mine, guard ship
- All done
- With attempts to tow her having failed, she was abandoned with most of her crew having been successfully evacuated, and eventually sank. Awkward, possibly split?
- See how I reworded it
- earlier class, the same high speed needs an "and" or something
- Added
- Change enlisted men to the British equivalent, "ratings"
- Good catch
- provide metric conversions in diameter for the various pounder guns
- Done
- main battery turrets sides surplus "s" in turrets?
- Fixed
- side-plate damage Do you mean hull?
- Sure
- Malta on 5 October 1905. She underwent a refit at Malta after her grounding, and a second refit there Suggest swapping the "there" at the sentence with the second Malta to avoid close conjunction syndrome
- Works for me
- Irresistible transferred to the Channel Fleet was transferred
- Done
- counter fire from Irresistible forced the Ottomans to check their fire, knocking out two guns in the process Awkward
- Reworded slightly
- Fix the conversion for 8 inch guns
- Done
- began to fail suggest malfunction--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:30, 27 November 2018 (UTC)
- Sounds good. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 21:36, 27 November 2018 (UTC)