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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:56, 22 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Will do this soon. JAGUAR  20:56, 22 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

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  • "Inconstant was the first of six fast, iron-hulled, frigates designed" - the opening sentence of the design section doesn't mention the fact that she was unarmoured (only the lead does)
    • Good catch.
  • "The following year the ship was assigned to the Detached Squadron" - this isn't italicised in the lead
    • And again.
  • "which visited ports in Scandinavia after Inconstant joined them at Gibraltar" - link Gibraltar
    • And thrice.
  • "until he was got sick at Hong Kong" - in Hong Kong
  • No dead links
  • No dab links

Amazing that this ship was almost in service for 90 years. On hold until those minor issues are out of the way JAGUAR  21:17, 22 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'd bet that she was very spacious once they pulled her engines and boilers and wrought iron is pretty durable. HMS Warrior (1860), the first iron-hulled ironclad, is still afloat down next to HMS Victory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:15, 23 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I've been on both ships! I've been on the Victory three times and the Warrior once, as I live near Portsmouth. It never gets old. Thanks for addressing these, promoted JAGUAR  12:17, 23 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]