Talk:HMS Hermes (95)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk) 07:13, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Comments

The beam of 73 feet 3 inches (22.3 m), in the text differs from the inf box 70 feet 3 inches (21.4 m)

Fixed.

The ships speed in the text is 26.178 knots (48.482 km/h; 30.125 mph) and in the inf box 25 knots (46 km/h; 29 mph)

Read it again. Design speed was 25 knots and speed on trials was 26.178 knots.

In the service history section - two single 40-millimetre (1.6 in) 2-pounder "pom-pom" AA guns prior to this measurements are imperial first and metric in brackets for consistency can this be changed.

Done.

In the Second World War section Hermes rammed the armed merchant cruiser HMS Corfu. Makes it sound like a deliberate act consider changing to collided with or similar.

Fixed.

Some minor points well done again. Jim Sweeney (talk) 07:48, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:39, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Passed Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:35, 16 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]