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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:18, 1 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:18, 1 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • No DABs or external links.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • Need |ship power line with ihp and number of boilers
  • Use the link I gave you for the VTE engines in both the infobox and main body.
  • Watch your conversions and probably a digit too many in the infobox
  • Just a suggestion, but you could streamline the torpedo tube data in the infobox.
  • Link cylindrical boilers, depot ship.
  • relieved by first-class protected cruiser Missing "the"
  • Hannibal was placed on the disposal list at Alexandria in January 1920, and was sold for scrapping on 28 January 1920. She was scrapped in Italy. Combine these two sentences.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:02, 12 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]