Talk:HMS Goliath (1898)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:11, 28 October 2017 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:11, 28 October 2017 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: - this still on your radar? Parsecboy (talk) 12:03, 18 November 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, a little distracted.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:30, 19 November 2017 (UTC)

• no DABs, images appropriately licensed.
• Move the link for barbettes to the first use.
  • Good catch
• Clarify that Ritchie was the ship's XO.
  • Good idea
• What types of ship were Talbot and Dublin?
  • Fixed
• Later in the day, order was restored on shore, and the Allied troops were able to occupy Sedd el Bahr, and reinforcements were landed, which allowed the advance to push toward Krithia on 27 April. awkward
  • Yeah, that is kind of a monstrosity - split and reworded.
• Explain or link beam ends
  • Probably simpler to just say "side" - that was left in the article from before I rewrote it.
• causing a large explosion. began to capsize almost immediately Missing word here, I think.
  • Yup, fixed
• Any info on her wreck available?
  • Added some details from wrecksite - hadn't thought of that. Thank Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 13:49, 24 November 2017 (UTC)