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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil (talk · contribs) 06:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
- Where's the caption for the first pic?
- Added.
- "the
shipspent"- Good catch.
- Please add to dates
- Not required by MOS, otherwise somebody at FAC would have complained about their lac,.
- What's the "1929 Programme"?
- Clarified.
- "sailed to Greenock, Scotland, and" note the comma
- Agreed.
- "while 69 survivors were rescued by nearby vessels." passive voice.
- Fixed.
- Checklinks reviews 3 damaged links.
- The links are good, you just need to select which convoy you want to look at.
- Add alt text to images (strongly recommended).
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:31, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
- Is there anything left to do here?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:50, 26 October 2011 (UTC)