Talk:HMS Cornwall (56)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 19:38, 13 August 2016 (UTC)

Grabbing this for a review. Miyagawa (talk) 19:38, 13 August 2016 (UTC)

• Image licence fine.
• No duplicate links.
• Referencing all good.
• Lead: Should a link to Indian Ocean be added, or would it hit WP:Overlink? At the moment you've got it linked in the article body, but not the lead.
• Certainly, you can link to Pacific War and Convoy.
• Description: Link Fuel oil
• Construction and career: Did you want to redlink 2nd Cruiser Squadron for future expansion since you've already linked to the 5th.
• Link Vichy France
  • Good on you for catching the missing links. I typically write the lead last so it's easy for me to not put links there as I've already linked them later in the article. And thanks for picking this one up so fast.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:23, 13 August 2016 (UTC)

That's it, as usual the prose it good and it's just nitpicks from me. Miyagawa (talk) 19:49, 13 August 2016 (UTC)

Great, happy to promote. Nice job. Miyagawa (talk) 22:03, 13 August 2016 (UTC)