Talk:HMS Canopus (1897)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 14:35, 7 September 2017 (UTC)

I'll take this one. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:35, 7 September 2017 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y
• Images appropriately licensed Y

Prose Suggestions

• "After the war, the ship was broken up in 1920." For almost all the article, Canopus is referred to by name or as "her"; the use of "the ship" is understandable in other places except here;
• "The ship was launched on 12 October 1897," And here.
• " four 18-inch (460 mm) submerged torpedo tubes submerged in the hull." It seems a little redundant to say submerged twice, but it's your call if you want to remove it.

  That is all my prose suggestions; as the article meets all criteria already, I will be immediately passing it. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:46, 7 September 2017 (UTC)