Talk:HMS Brazen (H80)/GA1

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 21:12, 8 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Dabs and external links are good (no action required)
In "description" it might be worthy to note how the ship design deviated from the typical B-class destroyer as a frame of reference. Even if it was an exact specification of the class, just say so.
- Why? This is unnecessary as I've presented her info as provided by my sources. If she varied significantly, I'd have mentioned it.
"The ship was ordered on 22 March 1929 from Palmers Shipbuilding and Iron Company at Hebburn under the 1928 Naval Programme" - is there a link to this program? If not, add a sentence or two explaining what it was (I assume it was a naval expansion plan)
- Linked, it was the annual shipbuilding authorization.
"The ship received a refit at Devonport from August to October 1933 and another at Malta a few months later." - any idea the nature of these refits?
- Nope, just the standard sort of things.
Also, any idea of the number of convoys the ship escorted in the war?
- No, that sort of detailed data isn't available for the coastal convoys.

Will check back soon. —Ed!^(talk) 21:18, 8 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]