Talk:HMS Bellona (1909)/GA1
GA Review
[edit]| GA toolbox |
|---|
| Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:06, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
Will do ASAP. JAGUAR 21:06, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]- "The ship served as the flotilla leader for the 2nd Destroyer Flotilla" - I recommend removing this red link
- "Bellona spent the bulk of World War I with the squadron" - the 1st Battle Squadron?
- Clarified.
- "Her conning tower was protected by four inches of armour" - convert to metric
- "As a scout cruiser, the ship was only lightly protected to maximize her speed" - maximise
- "On 17 December 1914, Bellona collided with the destroyer leader Broke" - why is the HMS prefix missing?
- I generally save the prefix for when a ship is operating in a group of mixed nationalities.
- No dead links
- No dab links
Minor nitpicking stuff, but this will pass once they are all out of the way 
JAGUAR 21:16, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for reviewing this. It's been a pleasure working with you.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:58, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for addressing them. You too! With all of those done, I'll pass this. JAGUAR 22:42, 1 May 2016 (UTC)