Talk:HMS Albemarle (1901)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:23, 11 December 2018 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:23, 11 December 2018 (UTC)

Hey @Sturmvogel 66:, can you take a look at this soon? I'd like to get it done before the end of the year. Thanks. Parsecboy (talk) 12:25, 20 December 2018 (UTC)

• No DABs, images appropriately licensed. Is there a date for the Bain pic? And shouldn't the drawing be attributed to Barnaby?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:21, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
  • Just the vague range of 1910-1915 - good catch on Barnaby, I had forgotten to do that one. One of these days we'll go through and fix all of them...
• Add a link for ihp and specify the type of length and draught in the infobox
  • Mostly done - Conway's isn't specific on the draught and I can't see that page of Burt in google (I've tried all four editions that are previewable)
• Isn't there an article on her six-inch guns?
  • Good catch
• Use digits for the number of boilers
  • Done
• Add links and diameter conversions for the guns in the main body. Either explain calibre or drop it all together. Personally, I save that detail for the class article.
  • Done
• bulkheads on the aft end of the belt was 7 to 11 in were and be consistent when spelling out abbreviating measurements of the same type within the same paragraph.
  • Fixed
• Her main battery turrets sides were 8 to 10 in (203 to 254 mm) thick, atop 11 in (279 mm) barbettes, and the casemate battery Link main battery, battery (artillery) and isn't turrets supposed to be possessive?
  • Good catch
• Explain Flag extra and 2nd Flagship
  • Done
    • You should link division here as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:40, 21 December 2018 (UTC)
• Is there an article on the Quebec Tercentenary?
  • Not that I'm aware of
• and underwent a refit passive voice
  • Tweaked
• Link gale, guard ship, antisubmarine ships
  • Done
• Albemarle was in reserve until April 1919, used as an overflow accommodation ship for the naval barracks at Devonport, and was attached to the Gunnery School in 1919. Albemarle Too many names in close conjunction--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:47, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 21:40, 21 December 2018 (UTC)