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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:15, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]


I'll leave down some comments when I get a stable internet connection - give it a couple of days! Thanks, Jaguar 21:15, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Going to do this review while I have stable internet connection! Jaguar 15:03, 12 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:


Initial comments

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Date formats

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This isn't a problem that's going to affect GA, but it might be something worth checking. In the lead the date format of "February 23, 2000" is Month/Day/Year (American format) and in the body of the article "The designer herself also wore it to a Met Gala on 6 December 1999" it is Day/Month/Year (British format). Just wondering which one you would prefer?

Lead

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  • Don't see any problems here; the lead complies per WP:LEAD and meets the GA criteria

Background

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  • "...was also featured in the main campaign of the fashion house that year" - forgive my misunderstandings, what is fashion house referring to?
Reply: The house of Versace; the fashion label. Mabalu (talk) 16:23, 12 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

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Really can't find any problems here. The prose is in good standing and meets the GA criteria.

References

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All the references are working and the citations are in their correct places, complying per the GA criteria.

Close - promoted

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The article fully meets the GA criteria, it is comprehensive, stable, well-written and all the references meet the GA criteria. Honestly can't find any other problems with it, despite my little knowledge on fashion I can say that from a reader's (and reviewer's) point of view that this article should pass the GAN. The date formats also shouldn't affect the GAN. @Dr. Blofeld: well done on another GA! Jaguar 15:03, 12 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaguar: and @Mabalu:. Thanks both for doing this!!♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:50, 12 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]