Talk:Green Versace dress of Jennifer Lopez/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:15, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
I'll leave down some comments when I get a stable internet connection - give it a couple of days! Thanks, ☠ Jaguar ☠ 21:15, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
- Going to do this review while I have stable internet connection! ☠ Jaguar ☠ 15:03, 12 August 2014 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Initial comments
[edit]Date formats
[edit]This isn't a problem that's going to affect GA, but it might be something worth checking. In the lead the date format of "February 23, 2000" is Month/Day/Year (American format) and in the body of the article "The designer herself also wore it to a Met Gala on 6 December 1999" it is Day/Month/Year (British format). Just wondering which one you would prefer?
Lead
[edit]- Don't see any problems here; the lead complies per WP:LEAD and meets the GA criteria
Background
[edit]- "...was also featured in the main campaign of the fashion house that year" - forgive my misunderstandings, what is fashion house referring to?
- Reply: The house of Versace; the fashion label. Mabalu (talk) 16:23, 12 August 2014 (UTC)
Reception
[edit]Really can't find any problems here. The prose is in good standing and meets the GA criteria.
References
[edit]All the references are working and the citations are in their correct places, complying per the GA criteria.
Close - promoted
[edit]The article fully meets the GA criteria, it is comprehensive, stable, well-written and all the references meet the GA criteria. Honestly can't find any other problems with it, despite my little knowledge on fashion I can say that from a reader's (and reviewer's) point of view that this article should pass the GAN. The date formats also shouldn't affect the GAN. @Dr. Blofeld: well done on another GA! ☠ Jaguar ☠ 15:03, 12 August 2014 (UTC)
@Jaguar: and @Mabalu:. Thanks both for doing this!!♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:50, 12 August 2014 (UTC)