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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:16, 21 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Infobox has inconsistent commas for 1000s (or 1,000s).
  • One very short para for the lead could be improved, it's supposed to summarise the article - my rule of thumb: check it against the table of contents, have you summarised the article in the lead?
  • "Bolliger & Mabillard stand-up roller coaster" three links without unlinked words between is confusing to a reader. It's a hard call but can you rephrase it?
  • Is there a suitable link for "inversions" for non-expert readers?
  • "About 1999, its track " -> "Around 1999, its..."
  • " early 2006" hyphen.
  • "track returned to its " perhaps "track was returned" as it didn't do it itself.
  • "(as confirmed by local media)" is that needed?
  • Don't overlink Six Flags.
  • What is "zoning approval"?
  • "The ride is located ..." reiterate the name.
  • What is B&M?
  • Link Riddler's Revenge first time round.
  • " peaked at #47" avoid hash for number per WP:HASH. Check others.
  • Don't SHOUT in the refs.
  • Check refs for correct use of en-dash in the title fields.

The Rambling Man (talk) 19:05, 22 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GAN criteria

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    Several comments above to be addressed.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Not far from decent, so I'll put it on hold for seven days. Let me know when you're ready for a re-assessment. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:05, 22 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: I believe I have addressed all the issues. Themeparkgc  Talk  00:01, 23 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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