Talk:Greece at the 2014 Winter Paralympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 00:14, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Like with the Iran at the 2014 Winter Paralympics article I just reviewed, I think the lead could use some expansion.

Background

There should be some more information about about the 2014 Paralympics
Added some basic statistics, not sure what you're looking for, Usernameunique? Courcelles (talk) 00:47, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Has Greece ever medalled at the Paralympics?
- Many times at the Summer ones, never at the Winters. Courcelles (talk) 00:27, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Disability classification

Les autres links to The Others (1974 film). (Same with Iran article just mentioned/reviewed)
- Fixed, here and in Iran. Courcelles (talk) 00:27, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Should "Les" be capitalized? (Same with Iran article)

Likely both words should be. Courcelles (talk) 00:27, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Alpine skiing

LW10-1 — What are the specifics of this classification?
- Added the formal definition. Courcelles (talk) 00:37, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
How old was Efthymios Kalaras when he had the motorcycle accident? Was he a competitive athlete beforehand?
- Source just says around 20 years ago. No clue if he was an athlete first, the sources don't say. Courcelles (talk) 00:37, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Who won silver and bronze?
- Added, though I'm not sure it is truly relevant. Courcelles (talk) 00:37, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
How were the events scored?
- Added. Courcelles (talk) 00:31, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"On 13 March, he took part in the sitting slalom, but failed to finish the first run" — Did he have a second run?
- Nope, you don't get to participate in the second without finishing the first. Courcelles (talk) 00:31, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - In that case, is it correct to say "DNF," or would "Did not start"/"Did not advance" be more appropriate?

Photograph

How about a photograph of Kalaras?
- Similar to Iran, we don't have one, and one 9isn't turning up. No way we can justify a fair-use image on an article like this. Courcelles (talk) 00:31, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This article also looks good, Courcelles. The comments above are very similar to the comments for the Iran article. --Usernameunique (talk) 00:14, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Courcelles, one comment above. --Usernameunique (talk) 06:21, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Let's try it this way, see my edit today? Courcelles (talk) 15:03, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Courcelles, changed it slightly so it's now run 1 DNF, run 2 DNS, and final did not advance. Feel free to change it if you think there's a better way of describing it. Otherwise looks good, and passing. --Usernameunique (talk) 01:53, 10 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]