Talk:Great Northern Highway/GA1

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 01:08, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Right. Will read and jot queries below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:08, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

~~Economically, it is a vital link as it provides access through the Wheatbelt and Mid West to the resource rich regions of the Pilbara and Kimberley.~~ ~~...I'd just say, " Economically, it provides vital access through the Wheatbelt and Mid West to the resource rich regions of the Pilbara and Kimberley." (let facts speak for themselves)~~

Done - Evad37 [talk] 09:51, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

~~Port Hedland link were completed over the next two years, with the last part officially opened on 16 December 1989 by Bob Brown and Bob Pearce~~ ~~- link (or redlink) these blokes~~

Done - Evad37 [talk] 09:51, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

~~with the road widened, turning and overtaking lanes constructed, and improved street lighting~~ ~~- it flow smoother if all three were passive verbs, so "with the road widened, turning and overtaking lanes constructed, and street lighting improved"~~

Done - Evad37 [talk] 09:51, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Work on Great Northern Highway has remained ceaseless - odd construction..plenty of options for rewording to make more natural-sounding.

Could you elaborate, or provide examples? - Evad37 [talk] 09:51, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"Work on Great Northern Highway has been continuous", "Work on Great Northern Highway has continued without pause/gone on without pause" are a couple of permutations that come to mind....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:43, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Done, changed remained ceaseless → been continuous - Evad37 [talk] 13:51, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

~~A 21-kilometre-long (13 mi) section of between New Norcia and Walebing is scheduled to been reconstructed between mid-2014 and 2016~~ ~~- err, could remove the "of" and ..."been" to "be"?~~

Done - Evad37 [talk] 09:51, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

~~As of 2014, the project is awaiting federal approvals~~ ~~- should "approvals" be plural?~~

Done - Evad37 [talk] 09:51, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'm taking that as a "yes" then....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:36, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Woops, yes, I meant to say that the source uses the plural form - Evad37 [talk] 13:44, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

~~No blackspots or historical horror accidents...?~~

Nothing beyond the routine stuff covered by WP:NOTNEWS - Evad37 [talk] 09:51, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

ok Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:36, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Overall, a nice read and within striking distance of GA. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 08:44, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, I have replied to your comments above. - Evad37 [talk] 09:51, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

1. Well written?:

Prose quality:

Manual of Style compliance:

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:

References to sources:

Citations to reliable sources, where required:

No original research:

3. Broad in coverage?:

Major aspects:

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4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:

Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?

No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:

Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

The two images - File:Paynes find c1980 ewd.JPG and File:Wyndham 1962 EW Digby-15.jpg should they have OTRS for licencing if Gnangarra wasn't the author? Might be wroth clearing up before potential FAC...? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:35, 10 August 2014 (UTC) Images to be fixed with OTRS later. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:07, 16 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

Overall:

Pass or Fail:

- ~~pending image licencing query above. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:35, 10 August 2014 (UTC)~~[reply]

I have asked Gnangarra to comment on the images/licencing - Evad37 [talk] 11:09, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Casliber: I have removed the images for now; Gnangarra advises that he'll "address an otrs ticket but it wont be with the time period of ga review" - Evad37 [talk] 00:20, 16 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]