Talk:Grave stelai from Grave Circle A, Mycenae

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Andrew O.'s Comment

Hello, this is Andrew O. for your review.

This is all in all a very good article. It is well structured and coherent, with a good flow and quite a bit of content. Beyond that you have good formatting, and seem to have made no mistakes in that regard.

Your first header does a good job of going over the basics of the stelai, and your description is even better in that it goes into detail about each of the stelai with a bullet point.

Furthermore your analysis of the meaning and symbolism of the stelai is pretty much spot on. You obviously did your homework in regards to the scholarship on stelai.

While it is not crucial to your article in the context of the class, if you added the modern day location of the grave stelai it would be nice for someone looking to see them in person.

Sunni's Comment

Hi Kara, honestly, there's not much for me to say but great job!!!! Your article is extremely informative, well written, and well analyzed. Keep doing what you're doing! Sunniobrien (talk) 20:28, 14 November 2017 (UTC)Sunni O'Brien[reply]

Comments from Prof. Paga

Hi Kara - this is an excellent article! Andrew's comments about adding a current location would be nice, and I have just a few suggestions of my own.

Consider adding a map of Greece, indicating where Mycenae is located, or a plan of Mycenae that shows the location of Grave Circle A.
Proofread the final paragraph -- some of the sentences (particularly the 2nd to last one) could be rephrased for a smoother understanding.

Jpaga (talk) 18:10, 1 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

Hi! This looks good - my only concern is that someone may suggest that this get merged into the main article on Grave Circle A, as the article on that is relatively small as far as overall articles go and as such, doesn't entirely need a content fork. I'm not sure if they will or not, but I wanted to throw this out there as something that may happen in the future so if there's any additional sourcing to be found that specifically covers the grave stelai, it would be good to add it if it fits. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:18, 4 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]